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       Every finely smoothed curve was burnished by the warm fading light of a hundred candles she had lit before my arrival. Her sensuous brown eyes ablaze with the flickering flames that danced amongst their darkness. Her curled onyx hair lay amongst the crimson-silken sheets with alluring beauty. Captivating, exotic, seductive was her body that my eyes narrowly paid attention to the Eagle in her hand being slowly drawn across her body. She slowly licked across the barrel with a playful smirk across her face.

       “This for your wife?”

       My head nodded slowly in agreement with her as she pointed it towards me, her other hand with a motioning finger for me to come closer.

       “Why don’t you hire me?”

       That playful grin again, “who would be stupid enough to hire a woman to kill?”

       She cocked the gun, her motioning finger pressed to her lips for my silence, "your wife."
©2007-2009 ~Ninja-Penguins
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Submission to a flash prose contest for ~writeaway
Figure it's about time to enter and also time to update my gallery with a fresh piece of work. ^^;

Hope you all enjoy.

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:iconhindered-mind:
I really like the description, nicely done

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Life is easy; it's dying that's hard.
:iconoverfiend-87:
very interesting and she certainly sounds very sexy. heh and it seems like she got screwed by his wife one last time.

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my :gallery: might have something that interests you :).

Come look at look at cowell81 stories. Take it from me. I live in fiction and he writes like a pro.
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:iconninja-penguins:
Certainly he did ^^ and thank you for the fav.
:iconoverfiend-87:
np i really liked this peice.

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my :gallery: might have something that interests you :).

Come look at look at cowell81 stories. Take it from me. I live in fiction and he writes like a pro.
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:iconryu-son:
LOL! Very visual, and nice ending! Short but sweet!

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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim

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